Wednesday, October 18, 2006
3 Strikes Law
| Dear Aiden. I'm Charlie. It's glad to have another special experience of this recording assignment. I think it's not appropriate to send the nonviolent criminals into jail for their whole life because they didn't commit a very serious crime. Therefore, I suggest the government may put those nonviolent criminals in jail for an extremely long period of time instead of a whole life, or they may assign them to help our society. For instance, the prisoners can help cleaning the street or use their talents to do some help. These are my opinions. Thank you very much! To play the message, click on the 'Play Message' button below. kang |
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Here's the corrected version of your work :-)
I think it's not appropriate to send the nonviolent criminals into jail for their whole life because they didn't commit a very serious crime. Therefore, I suggest that the government put those nonviolent criminals in jail for an extremely long period of time instead of a whole life, or they may assign them to help our society. For instance, the prisoners can help clean the streets or use their talents to good use. These are my opinions. Thank you very much!
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